As they travel to their destination, the Omray and Mhiray hear the calls of the dead, until they land on the Original Planet with suspicion, and are tested for strength of Power.
I hate to say it, because the writing is so strong, but I was disappointed with this book. The first part, which covers more than half the book, was long and mostly uninteresting, even if it did build on the strengths of the characters –but I feel that we saw so much of this in other books, especially between Sira and Morgan. Almost all the other characters felt like name-dropping, especially since they had nothing to do in the second part of the book. Is their destination revealing? Yes, to the extent that we see Tikitik and Oud again. Was it interesting? Not really. We see a bit of culture from the descendants of the Hoveny, but can’t be immersed in it the way we were with Aryl in Reap the Wild Wind. It’s disappointing compared to the Drapsk, the Assemblers, and the machinations of the three races on Cerci. However, the climax was unexpected, and brought the book up a notch by itself. Unfortunately, the lead up left me wanting more substance.
Do expectations have anything to do with my disappointment with
this book? While This Gulf of Time and Stars kept me turning
pages to see what happened next, this book left me lethargic,
wondering if something interesting would happen before the
energy petered out.
Before going into that, though, I must bring attention to the absolutely stunning cover art. It's absolutely phenomenal.
The voyage from Cerci, a very interesting planet in the
Stratification trilogy, to Brightfall, devolved home of the
Hoveny, was long –way too long. Most of the Mhiray and Omray
were well-behaved, but Sira points out those who were
discontent, and most likely to cause trouble. Mostly, though,
they don’t. There were about a hundred and seventy five
survivors, and I think the author names every one of them at
some point. There are Choosers and Chosen, scouts and Council
members, but only Sira can talk to the ship, which they call
Sona, as it was the Sona cloisters. They don’t know their
destination, nor are there any controls that they can find,
which frustrates Morgan to no end.
They try to steal intimate moments, but somebody is always
looking for them. The best part about Sira is her mischievous
hair. I loved every mention of it, especially when it would
interrupt a tense or serious moment. Barac worries about Ruti,
who is taking care of all the children on the ship. Her
pregnancy is going well, and so is Sira’s, though it’s most
unusual as Aryl can speak into just about anybody’s mind.
Then one of the kids says she can speak to the dead, and two
Joined start going crazy. I thought it was a strange remedy for
Morgan and the other doctor to prescribe a funeral ceremony
where they could say goodbye to their old life and lost ones. I
felt the author should have found a better way to try and
explain what was happening, because it was a weak explanation.
Of course, the true explanation is much, much more complex and
intriguing.
Morgan has found a workshop, complete with artefacts that Barac
can activate, meaning they are Hoveny. It’s a conceit so that he
has some artefacts when they arrive at Brightfall.
Strangely, in the middle of a crisis, Sira asks the ship to
create a distraction, and it pops out the rest of the food packs
from the daily supply, which keeps them all occupied while
others recover. Morgan can detect the illness in many others,
but fortunately the ship starts reconfiguring itself for
arrival.
As usual, the author alternates between Sira’s point of view and
others, sometimes Morgan, rarely Barac, which is unfortunate,
and sometimes the Watchers in the m’hir, which the ship has a
different name for. The Watchers, while mysterious, are more
important than they seem, and they scream when they detect a
breach.
The planet Brightfall was once home to the Hoveny, who powered
so much of their technology with the m’hir, even their
spaceships. Their mysterious Fall was caused when they were
completely cut off from the m’hir. Cersi was an experiment to
reconnect them to the m’hir. There are plenty of species that
can access the m’hir, like the drapsk, and the Rutegans, the
Oud, and even Morgan, but none abused it so much that the
Watchers had to take action.
So the Tikitik, who are on another planet in the same solar
system, are masters of genetic manipulation, and took some Oud
material and put it in the Hoveny, and sent the twelve
spaceships to Cersi. It’s not clear to me if other planets were
part of the same experiment. Aryl was the culmination of the
experiment, which made the Oud go insane, and eventually created
the Clan in Trade Pact Space.
The dead are calling, because the Hoveny were drawing the m’hir
beings into their wombs. When they lived out their lives, the
beings went back to the m’hir. No wonder the Rugherans blocked
Vyna from taking off –they were trying to live forever,
transferring old souls into new vessels.
Hopefully the next book will explain more about this process,
because I find it strange that the dead are only starting to
call to them now, as they approach Brightfall. Why not in Trade
Pact space, or on Cersi?
We get some points of view from a religious leader, who takes
care of the welcome signal for the ship, and a gender-neutral
person who is suspicious of the change the ship will bring. As
the ship approaches, it dissolves into the m’hir, sending the
passengers out on pods to land on Brightfall. Many get snared
from the m’hir, and disappear. Sira organizes a ride on a bunch
of massive Oud, where others die, to get to a dig site, where
Hoveny remains have been discovered. While interesting, I’m not
sure what it has to do with the story.
They meet a woman whose authority seems to exceed that of the
gender-neutral supervisor. She’s more like the Clan than any
other, though she says the political powers can remove their
access to the m’hir. It’s another lead that doesn’t seem to go
anywhere, in a book full of them. I hope the third book
addresses some of these. In the same camp, a Powerful girl
carries a tiny Oud around, and this creature seems to have even
higher authority, as it can detect Power.
There’s a bit of interplay between the characters, but it
doesn’t really matter, and doesn’t advance the story, especially
given what happens next. After a minor power struggle, where
Sira doesn’t have to challenge anybody, she’s brought to a
testing site. It’s not entirely clear why she agrees, except
maybe to try to give her people a chance to fit in. Anyway, she
goes to the testing site and activates the Hoveny devices, which
breach the m’hir, sending everything into chaos.
She learns their origin, and how they truly belong in the m’hir,
not here in the physical world. I loved the way her world was
completely turned upside down, how what started out as a disease
turned into a way home from a long time away. She has a tearful
goodbye with Morgan before sending him back to Trade Pact space,
where Huido gets a short guest appearance. Then she allows
herself to disappear to her natural world.
The end shows that she hasn’t fully accepted her home, as she’s
stuck in a kind of purgatory area, something the kids call
“boxes”. She seems to have forgotten everything, and rages with
all her Power to be free, but she can’t seem to. I hope the
third book has a satisfactory explanation. Maybe she can live in
both worlds, like the Drapsk or Rugharans.
I wish this book had had more substance. Characters are always
good, but sitting around the ship worrying wasn’t dramatic
enough to hold my attention. It’s a good thing I like the
writer’s style, because it was what kept me moving through the
book. The resolution to the Hoveny mystery was great, but it was
payoff without much suspense or lead-up, which was
disappointing.